Tuesday, October 12, 2010

great revision of a sonnet

Mara Geiger
J Darling
CRTW 201



Update of Shakespeare’s sonnet 115

the tweets i have tweeted u r not accurate
even that time i commented on ur wall that i luved u a million
and i couldn’t imagine luving u more than at that moment
yet i luv u so much more!
time changes everything
creating false promises, deceitful politicians,
wrinkles, ruining the most sincere intentions,
even making hard asses lighten up a bit
so even tho time may change these feelings
why shouldn’t i txt u every minute of the day how i <3 u infinity
i was sure as hell when i tweeted u and even though things change
my luv for u has not yet matured
so how can i profess infinite luv when it grows infinitely more

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